BAND NINE SAMPLE ESSAYS
If you’re preparing for the IELTS exam, you should be paying attention to band nine sample essays. These can be a valuable resource in multiple ways. You can:
- Look at how the essays answer the structure.
- Explore the structure of the essays.
- Take the best of the vocabulary and use it yourself.
- Find useful grammar structures.
If you’re looking for model answers, you’re in the right place. On this page, you can find a list of model answers written by an experienced IELTS tutor which are packed with the best practices in vocabulary, grammar and essay structure.
Why you should trust these essays
While it’s important to look for band nine IELTS essays, it’s not always easy to find them. Anyone can write an essay, post it to a website and call it a band nine essay sample. As a result, some students end up copying fairly poor examples of IELTS writing. That’s why I put together this page of essays. All of these were written by me, an experienced teacher with a Master’s degree from Oxford University and years of experience with IELTS writing.
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Types of IELTS essay
There are five broad types of essays in task two of the IELTS writing exam. These are:
- Agree or disagree: Asks you for your opinion on an issue.
- Both sides and an opinion: Asks you to look at both sides of something and explain what you think about the issue.
- Problem and solution: Asks you to explain one or more problems with something and some solutions.
- Two-part question: Asks you two questions.
- Advantages and disadvantages: Asks you to examine the advantages and disadvantages of something without giving your opinion.
The essays on this page are organised by these five types. I’ve also included all of our task one essays at the start of the list.
Task one essays
Task one essays are quite different in format and execution to task two essays. For task one, you have to explain a diagram of some kind. You have a fewer words and the structure is quite different. You can learn more about these essays in our task one guide. All of our task one essays are collected below.
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The pie charts below show the online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. -
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The flow chart below explains how laundry is handled. Describe the process using the information below. -
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The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. -
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The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. -
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The maps below show an island in 1980 and as it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. -
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This chart shows music sales in the United Kingdom by medium. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Agree or Disagree Essays
This type of essay simply asks for your opinion on an issue. The best way to approach these is to give two specific reasons for one point of view. These usually ask you ‘What is your opinion?’ or ‘To what extent do you agree or disagree?’.
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Read this essay.: IELTS Band Nine Essay: Is ambition a positive character trait?
Some people believe that ambition is a positive character trait. What is your opinion? -
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Fast food is increasingly popular in large cities. Compare the advantages and disadvantages of this type of food and give your own opinion. -
Read this essay.: IELTS Band Nine Sample: Does University Guarantee You a Good Job?
Some people believe that a good university degree is a guarantee of a good job. What is your opinion? -
Read this essay.: Essay of the Week: Should school children have homework?
Some people believe that school children should not be given homework. What is your opinion? -
Read this essay.: Essay of the Week: Old or new buildings?
Some people believe that we should knock down historical buildings to make way for more practical new builds. To what extent do you agree or disagree? -
Read this essay.: Essay of the Week: Should you work for yourself or a company?
Many people believe it is better to be self-employed than work for a company. To what extent do you agree or disagree? -
Read this essay.: Essay of the Week: Are experiences or possessions more important?
Some people believe that spending money on experiences is more important than material possessions. To what extent do you agree or disagree? -
Read this essay.: Essay of the Week: Paying money to parents to take care of their kids
The government should pay money to the parents of very young children, so that one of them can stay at home and look after their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Both sides and an opinion essays
Both sides and an opinion essays will ask you to compare both sides of an issue as well as give your point of view. Unlike an agree or disagree essay, you should make sure you cover both sides. Typically these will ask you to ‘compare the advantages and disadvantages and disadvantages and give your opinion’ or ‘compare both sides and give your opinion’.
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Read this essay.: Advantages and Disadvantages of Robots: Band nine IELTS Essay
Some people think that robots are very important to future human development. Others think that they are dangerous and have negative effects on society. Discuss both opinions and give your point of view. -
Read this essay.: Band Nine Sample Essay: Vacation at home or abroad?
Some people believe it is better to vacation in another country while others believe it is best to stay in one’s home country. Compare both sides and give your point of view. -
Read this essay.: Essay of the Week: Big or small weddings
Some people believe it is good to celebrate a wedding by spending lots of money on a large party while others prefer a small event with family and friends. Compare both sides and give your point of view. -
Read this essay.: Essay of the Week: Traditional or modern wisdom?
Some people believe it is important to pay attention to traditional wisdom while others believe people should embrace new ideas. Compare both sides and give your own opinion. -
Read this essay.: Essay of the Week: Should you raise children in the city or countryside?
Some people believe it is better to raise children in a city, while others believe the countryside is better. Compare both points of view and give your own opinion. -
Read this essay.: Essay of the Week: Should students get work experience before university?
Some people believe it is better for young people to work before attending university. Compare the advantages and disadvantages of this and give your own opinion.
Problem and solution essays
A problem and solution essay will require you to explore the issues caused by something and some ways of fixing those problems. It’s usually best to dedicate two paragraphs to two specific problems and then briefly mention some solution in the conclusion. These questions will almost always contain the words ‘problem’ and ‘solution’, so they should be easy to find.
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Read this essay.: Global warming: Band nine problem and solution essay
What are the causes of global warming and what can governments do to stop it? -
Read this essay.: Essay of the Week: Brain drain in the developing world
An increasing number of professionals like teachers and doctors are leaving poorer countries where they grew up to work in richer countries. What are some problems this causes and what are some solutions? -
Read this essay.: IELTS Essay of the Week: Problems and solutions with car reliance
A reliance on cars to get around causes issues in many cities. What are some of these problems and what are some solutions?
Two-part question essays
Two-part IELTS questions ask you to answer two questions. This can be a bit intimidating, but actually just requires you to dedicate one body paragraph to each issue. There aren’t any specific phrases that you can use to identify this question type, but it will always be obvious that there are two questions.
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Read this essay.: Essay of the Week: Cycling to work
Despite the health benefits and positive effect on traffic congestion, many people prefer to drive to work than to ride a bicycle. Why is this? What can be done to encourage cycling? -
Read this essay.: Essay of the Week: Should students study science or the arts?
Students are increasingly interested in learning practical subjects like maths, computing and engineering rather than learning about art and literature. Why is this change happening? What are some benefits of learning about art and literature? -
Read this essay.: Essay of the Week: Modern or traditional music
There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Advantages and disadvantages essays
These questions only ask you to look at the advantages and disadvantages of something. This makes them easy to confuse with questions that ask you to compare both sides and give your opinion. The structure of these is simple when you know how to identify them. The key thing is to not get them confused with another essay type.
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Read this essay.: Crime and punishment IELTS model essay with vocabulary
In some countries, crimes are punished harshly. What are some advantages and disadvantages of this approach? -
Read this essay.: Essay of the Week: Going to the cinema alone or with friends?
In recent years, more and more people have started going to the cinema on their own rather than with their friends. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this approach? -
Read this essay.: Essay of the Week: Studying online or in person?
In the last year, many people have had to study online rather than in person. What are some advantages and disadvantages of online study?